My Dad is Rich by Draco and the Malfoys
My Dad is Rich is by Draco and the Malfoys. It is based on the characters of Harry Potter. It talks about how Harry Potters father is dead. It is meant to be a commical song. Draco and the Malfoys band members names are Bradley and Brian. Bradley contributes vocals, drums and guitar. Brian contributes vocals, guitar and bass.
The song is funny. It doesn’t have great sound recording. It’s lyrics are meant to be commical and they are. The background music is simple but it works with the lyrics. When viewed on YouTube.com in a live performance its obvious that they have stage presence.
This song is worth listening to; it gives a good laugh and allows Harry Potter fans to take the characters and make them into real life people for a minute or two.
Ashley Desrochers
Block two
February 20, 2009
My Dad is Rich is by Draco and the Malfoys. It is based on the characters of Harry Potter. It talks about how Harry Potters father is dead. It is meant to be a commicalsong. Draco and the Malfoys band members names are Bradley and Brian LAST NAMES?. Bradley contributes vocals, drums and guitar. Brian contributes vocals, guitar and bass.
ReplyDeleteThe song is funny. It doesn’t have great sound recording. It’s lyrics are meant to be commicaland they are. The background music is simple but it works with the lyrics. When viewed on YouTube.com in a live performance its obvious that they have stage presence. AWKWARD WORDING
This song is worth listening to; it gives a good laugh and allows Harry Potter fans to take the characters and make them into real life people for a minute or two.
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Critical assessment and summary of content is kind of weak. What album is the song off? Where was the band founded? What are the brothers’ last names? How is the guitar playing? Is the singer awesome?
Org: 4.5
GUMS: 3
Effectiveness: 3.5
Word choice: 3.5
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